Pottymouth

Otto was so freaking hot but we're on different side of the charts. 

Dammit (つ╥﹏╥)つ!

Dixon givin me some real, early karkat homestuck vibes lmao

This was awesome, def will stick around to see more. Please keep updating this game!

I kinda wanna know how a dick-tongue feels like

I have..........soooooooo many questions. This was a great read

This was certainly an interesting and fun read, with dixon's mask and "new appendage" being metaphors for still being in the closet and sexuality. Dixon feels quite relatable, to me at least. 

Unsure about himself and falls upon being a pissy jack ass as a form of bravado to hide his more vulnerable side and new feelings about himself and he has quite a literal mask off moment with otto about wanting to get absolutely pinned and railed by the hunk. While also being reaffirmed about his queerness.

Otto, while hot he feels...too perfect or my likes. He works two jobs, volunteers at the club he invited dix to, has a fully kitted out apartment and studies at college all at the age of 22. Like, do you not need sleep? While it's certainly possible for  someone to be well put together at that age it's certainly very rare if he's not getting external help by family especially in this day and age. But he is someone that dixon needs to help navigate his sexuality and queerness. 

Overall it is a silly but cute short story vn. I kind of hope this gets turned into a full fledged thing later down the line. 

Dixon was fucking adorable, what a great submission this is.

using the central kink in this as a metaphor for queerness feels so incredibly obvious after reading this: it just clicks! i absolutely loved this. really cute, charmingly funny, and also Hot as Fuck

Cute little VN! Sometimes you see a kink and think "Oh, that's hot AWOOGA". Other times, you see a kink and think "Oh that's a fun idea, that's clever." This is a "fun idea" kink to me, and I mean that in a good way. I do appreciate that even though the themes are pretty simple, y'all did a good job incorporating and tying the kink INTO those themes, too. Also I appreciate the stupid (affectionate) pun name of Dixon. (Because there's dixon his mouth.)

When the mask came off I had to double check what I was seeing. 'Is that an anteater's tongue' I thought. But no it really was what it looks like. 

What a very strange balls to the wall piece of worldbuilding you put up.

Really fun, well made. I very much enjoyed seeing Dixon's character think a bit differently at the end of the story! I think he's such a good depiction of what an 'Alpha Male' thinks like.

I might've laughed at every single line. 5/5

That was... peculiar.

This was really interesting! It definitely took me a moment to adjust to the core kink going on here, but the story was a very neat, small thing. I also loved the title card, such a cool moment.

hell yessssssssss

Quite delightful and sweet while also being inside the head of someone that Kind Of Sucks ™

oh interesting :0